Tuesday, May 8, 2007
KOMEN ADVOKAT (MINGGU KEEMPAT)
Makluman Editor UjangMD:: NO Judgement from HAKIM (Kak Red) untuk Minggu Keempat ini kerana Ujang purposely bagi Kak RED cuti gara-gara Kak RED FLAT teruk kerana makan "telur penyu" yang Ujang bagi. Rungut Kak RED lagi, sampai sakit-sakit badannya, injured and failed in her netball due to "telur penyu". Alasan yang munasabah yang boleh diterima pakai oleh Ujang. Mungkin Kak Red alergy dengan "telur penyu" atau "first time" dapat makan telur penyu. Wallahualam!! Di sini Ujang memutuskan Vernon_Kedit menjadi ADVOKAT dan HAKIM untuk Minggu Keempat ini. Ini kerana Vernon_Kedit is more expert to judge on Dafi. MUKTAMAD!! Harap Maklum!!Penerangan MR Vernon_KeditAcross the board, everyone put in good effort and I sincerely thank all of you for your hard work. It wasn’t an easy assignment because you had to do the following:
1. Get to know who Dafi is.
2. Understand the role of an artiste manager.
3. Research the local entertainment industry in depth and all the technical aspects of being a recording artiste.
4. Design pretty pictures and other graphic stuff to impress me.
5. Come up with real suggestions and ideas based on the collation of your research.
The assignment, almost a thesis in a nutshell, was designed to test all your blogging skills using a real subject and a real subject matter and all of you rose to the challenge.
I am not looking for a technically and logically sound posting. You may get your facts wrong and that’s ok. What I am looking for is a visually and linguistically arresting and creative posting. Because that’s what blogging is all about. Capture the reader’s attention, sustain it, and never bore. Keep them coming back for more.
I shall be giving marks accordingly:
• Content (isi kandungan, isu dan perbahasan) – 33%
• Style (gaya tulisan) – 33%
• Presentation (kreativiti, grafik, persembahan dan impak keseluruhan) – 33%
The blogger with the lowest total will be eliminated.| Intan | ADVOKAT/ HAKIMI loved your posting; your presentation, the use of colours and graphics and a readable language style. Very well thought out and executed piece of work. And, seriously, you would make a good artiste manager.
• Content (isi kandungan, isu dan perbahasan) – 31%
• Style (gaya tulisan) – ?%
• Presentation (kreativiti, grafik, persembahan dan impak keseluruhan) – ?% |
| Kurt_Kuden | ADVOKAT/ HAKIMSuperb’ and ‘excellent’ are some words I would hesitate to use when describing anything but in your case, I’m using them. Written like a true prosaic blogger. Poetic yet informative, stylish and visually elegant. Clearly you did extensive reading and research and thank you for not regurgitating facts. Instead you presented your arguments by tying one point to the next seamlessly, and also by merging points to come up with new ones. And you kept it short and to the point but with lovely language. I also like the fact that you understand the concept of branding, whether consciously or sub-consciously. It was a good read. Watch out Sultanmuzaffar.
• Content (isi kandungan, isu dan perbahasan) – 28%
• Style (gaya tulisan) – ?%
• Presentation (kreativiti, grafik, persembahan dan impak keseluruhan) – ?% |
| Katarsis | ADVOKAT/ HAKIMDetailed, crispy and although your points were pretty ordinary, I liked the way you wrote. You covered every aspect. Plus, it was easy and readable. But it didn’t excite.
• Content (isi kandungan, isu dan perbahasan) – 20%
• Style (gaya tulisan) – ?%
• Presentation (kreativiti, grafik, persembahan dan impak keseluruhan) – ?% |
| Kriesz | ADVOKAT/ HAKIMYou came up with very good points, literally. Your whole posting was in point form, which is fine and but makes for boring reading. It was visually weak. I understand that you had to keep your visuals within the colour scheme and look of your blog, but because you had to sacrifice on visuals, you should have kept the writing short, sweet and crisp. Your good points were too long and they became repetitive and therefore boring. If you want to elaborate a point, give examples, not belabour it. I hope BKS will re-consider and keep you in the competition, because you are a good blogger and have written excellent pieces. Your last assignment was good, but this 4th assignment just lacked something.
• Content (isi kandungan, isu dan perbahasan) – 25%
• Style (gaya tulisan) – ?%
• Presentation (kreativiti, grafik, persembahan dan impak keseluruhan) – ?% |
| Syawaludin | ADVOKAT/ HAKIMFactual, graphic, informative and well-researched. You understand the elements that are required to survive in the music industry. And you presented your points in a logical and systematic way. Your English is atrocious but it was a good effort to express yourself clearly. I understood what you were trying to express and that’s what’s important. It wasn’t the best posting but it was the best AVERAGE posting as you covered all areas. It was an awful album cover, though. But I like collaboration. A lot.
• Content (isi kandungan, isu dan perbahasan) – 28%
• Style (gaya tulisan) – ?%
• Presentation (kreativiti, grafik, persembahan dan impak keseluruhan) – ?% |
| Bro_Rick | ADVOKAT/ HAKIM“Doktor peribadi Dafi juga saya akan sediakan, dia akan menjaga Dafi dan memantau kesihatan Dafi, biar kesihatan Dafi sentiasa dalam keadaan baik, baru lah mudah Dafi menjalankan tugasan harian sebagai artis.”
Even I never thought of this! Kelas ko!
Banyaknye points!!! Meletops! Your posting was fun and free, light and easy. But most importantly, it came across as sincere. Sungguh ikhlas. That’s your style. And it works for you. I loved reading your posting.
• Content (isi kandungan, isu dan perbahasan) – 25%
• Style (gaya tulisan) – ?%
• Presentation (kreativiti, grafik, persembahan dan impak keseluruhan) – ?% |
| Maliha_Anoushka | ADVOKAT/ HAKIMYou really did your best but it was boring. You had good points but they were a tad too long, and sub-points may be fine in working proposals but not necessarily so in a blog. But I liked your pics. Pity, had you made your writing more interesting, I would have enjoyed it more.
• Content (isi kandungan, isu dan perbahasan) – 25%
• Style (gaya tulisan) – ?%
• Presentation (kreativiti, grafik, persembahan dan impak keseluruhan) – ?% |
Tinta UjangMD:: Jangan kecut perut bila melihat peratusan anda.Hanya satu peratusan di ketahui. Masih menjadi tanda-tanya siapa yang bakal tersingkir pada Minggu Keempat. Nantikan esok 8 MEI 2007 (SELASA) (2PM) TOTAL/ RANKING peratusan para peserta beserta Assignment Minggu Kelima.
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